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08 January 2008

A brave attempt...


You will remember that I promised to be brave. Well - I stumbled upon this sort of poetry challenge at The Miss Rumphius Effect (clicky) and thought I would give it a go. This is so far out of my comfort zone - you have no idea.

Here we go... Comment carefully. Don't make me hurt you. ;)

Between a rock
And a hard place
Beauty lives.

Look
Where you don't expect.

Believe
When your head denies.

Risk
Comfort and pleasure.

Out of nothing,
Will come something.
Beauty lives.

8 comments:

Tricia said...

Brave indeed! This is lovely.

paisley said...

well i must say,, first attempt or thousandth... you did a lovely job,, and i really enjoyed this... thank you.....

DaisyBug said...

Thanks so much! I really appreciate your kind words.

Junebug said...

Oh gosh, that is good.

Joanna Schmidt said...

That dug deep for me. Thank you.

sister AE said...

there is beauty here, too.

DaisyBug said...

You guys are so kind! Thank you. I really do appreciate your kind words.

Sara said...

"Out of nothing will come something" That could be a definition of poetry itself. Thanks for being brave.