08 January 2008
A brave attempt...
You will remember that I promised to be brave. Well - I stumbled upon this sort of poetry challenge at The Miss Rumphius Effect (clicky) and thought I would give it a go. This is so far out of my comfort zone - you have no idea.
Here we go... Comment carefully. Don't make me hurt you. ;)
Between a rock
And a hard place
Beauty lives.
Look
Where you don't expect.
Believe
When your head denies.
Risk
Comfort and pleasure.
Out of nothing,
Will come something.
Beauty lives.
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8 comments:
Brave indeed! This is lovely.
well i must say,, first attempt or thousandth... you did a lovely job,, and i really enjoyed this... thank you.....
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your kind words.
Oh gosh, that is good.
That dug deep for me. Thank you.
there is beauty here, too.
You guys are so kind! Thank you. I really do appreciate your kind words.
"Out of nothing will come something" That could be a definition of poetry itself. Thanks for being brave.
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