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31 January 2008

Stillness

So this week's Poetry Stretch at Mis s Rumphius Effect (click) challenged us to write a Rondel. 11 lines, ABAB BAB ABAB - lines four and 11 repeating... Hmmm... I thought. THAT shouldn't be too hard.

HA! This one really challenged me - I started about five or six times until I chose the right topic for me...

Stillness is my greatest challenge - it is my personal Holy Grail. One in a while, I find it. This poem attempts to express that.

Stillness

Tentatively poised on that fine line.
My soul doing what I never will.
Everything suspended, silent, devine.
Moving in circles while standing still.

Breath exchanged, stress distilled.
Peace and tranquility my rich red wine.
Virtue and thought fade with my free will.

For just a moment what I need is mine.
Between thought and action my dream fulfilled.
With only you unbalance resigns.
Moving in circles while standing still.

21 comments:

paisley said...

girl,, that was wonderful.. i just couldn't get any of my thoughts to form into this mold.. i am keeping my attempts tho... you never know......

DaisyBug said...

Thank you! :) Once I found my subject the words pretty much fell out of me.

I so appreciate your kind comments.

sister AE said...

"Moving in circles while standing still" is a very cool line.

Cloudscome said...

I just followed your tai chi link in the side bar because I am a tai chi enthusiast. Somehow this poem reminds me of the practice. Circles to stillness... that's what we do! I like this a lot.

DaisyBug said...

You are spot on, Cloudscome. ;)

Frog said...

Wow D - you're really good at this !!

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